Friday, 19 February 2016

Bush Walk Cameo - Heidi

This week we were planning to do a cameo based around walking up Te Ahu Ahu but it was to wet to go so we created some Cameos based round us going for a walk in the bush area just beside our classroom.  Mrs Gardiner gave us an example that encouraged us to think about what we could see, hear, smell, touch (and taste).  Here is my published story.

Our writing goal today were to make sure we had spaces between words and missing lines.


2 comments:

  1. You had a good walk up that steep mountain didnt you Heidi!
    Did you wear your walking shoes ?
    Could you see our house or the school from up that high?
    You have done some lovely work here Heidi
    Love Mum and Dad

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  2. Hi mum! Yes I wore my walking shoes.
    I could see the farm from the top of Te Ahu Ahu maunga.
    Love Heidi

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